*Chang's Blog*
Mar 8th, 2014
Catalog-Diary
Today I heard two
guys passing me. They were talking about some rumors.
“Did you know that? Mr. Hutton is a racist!”
“Did you know that? Mr. Hutton is a racist!”
“I know that he never gives good points to Asians.”
Their sigh and whispering sound poked my ears sharply. I
tried to neglect them but the rumor was too loud for me. I shook my head
twice and walked into Hutton’s office.
As an ordinary, old fashioned professor, he
usually wore bright blue check shirt and bright brown pants with a big black
belt. There were numerous spots and stains on his shirt but he never washed it
out. The heavy glasses and his slowly moving mouth also played some role to
make everyone except I doze.
The
bell rang but Hutton stayed at his chair staring at a piece of paper. Not until
students gave up waiting for him, he softly drew a chalk on the board. Chang
grabbed her pencil hard.
Soon
I became the only student who was awake. The clock was running toward the
end of the class. Suddenly Hutton turned around and made a big smile.
“You
guys look so tired. Let’s just write a simple essay during the rest of the
class. It will not be graded.”
I looked into the paper which Hutton passed to me. My colleagues opened their
eyes one by one. They seemed surprised by the white paper in front of them.
The
backside of the paper, there was only one sentence: If ( ) turned out to be ( ), I….
“Fill
the paper. You have 30 minutes. Just let your imagination free.”
I looked up at him. Hutton was lifting his glasses to make his vision
clearer. After passing all the sheets to students, he returned to the chair. He
held a thin sheet of paper but his eyes became red almost at once. Through the
thick lens, his blue eyes were shining with joy because of the creative and
vivid ideas of young people. However he felt, the students just frowned as a
representation of their annoyance. I neither felt cozy so I just wrote about my older brother who was dead when I was young. His name was James.
'If my brother turned out to be alive, not dead, I will...'
'If my brother turned out to be alive, not dead, I will...'
When
I was middle on the way to home, I realized that I left my cellphone
in Hutton’s office. I hesitated at first but in no time I arrived at the
school.
I carefully knocked the door and noticed that there was no sound inside Hutton’s
office. There were his stuffs on the desk. On the one side of the desk,
there were piles of sheets that his students handed in yesterday. There was a single
piece of paper and a pencil next to the files. I couldn’t help but to
suppress my curiosity, read the first part of the paper.
If my
favorite friend turned out to be a racist, I will continue listening to the
class however keep some distance between us. No matter what subject he or she
teaches, I think I can’t get rid of thoughts that racists are inappropriate in
the world we currently live in. Unless he is a Big Brother.
It
was the in class essay paper. “Wait, Big brother?” Because the word reminded me James, I couldn’t stop saying it out loud. And suddenly, I heard footsteps. I hided behind a nearby desk. I didn't know why I should hide but the instinct commanded to hide.
Yes, for sure it was normal to be racist in the
past. And that age revealed itself to be one of darkness and sorrow. Only when
did we make concrete the notion of equality to all men did men see light, hope
is for everyone.
After a minute, he held the paper up and read it aloud. His face was full of satisfaction. He then started giggle which developed to a laughter. 'Well, his word is sound.' I was quite worried about him and myself. 'Is he okay..? Can I escape from this room today?'
And now, history restored itself, as men strived for evolution. New men were found. No. They were invented. They called to be the new race. They called themselves as trans-human. They believed that they were the chosen ones, or even members of a new race, who could utilize the digital gadgets far more effectively than the normal Homo Sapiens. By using such gadgets on a daily basis, they would be far smarter than the “normal” people.
Hutton's mouth was grumbling and his hand was scribbling. I soon became so bored. The murmuring sound tempted me to fall in a deep deep sleep.
Pop!
I heard something explode. I lifted eyelids up to find the old professor.
Hutton was gone. Only the paper was on the desk. I read the rest of the passage.
As the
development of technology began to improve, those trans-humans started to get
controlled by tech. Gadgets turned into robots similar to human-beings and they
started to get over the limit of fragile body made of cells. They would
strengthen their motor senses and strength. This is how ‘Big Brother’ appeared.
Big Brother, an unknown being guessed as a
trans-human, appeared and took control of the “gadgets”. Big Brother now had
the power to take secure of the world and control of both gadgets and trans-human.
They are so different from the ordinary men, so they are deserved to be
distinguished. In this vie
And
that was it. The fragments of thick glasses were scattered on the floor.
I don’t know. Maybe the Big brothers took hi
I don’t know. Maybe the Big brothers took hi
Interesting, and mysterious. I like the way you develop this teacher's character, and things move nicely forward at a quick appropriate pace. The first person narrative also works well. I think the element I like most about this story is the use of unfinished sentences and words which is a bit creepy and unique. As a science fiction type of story in the vein of the Animatrix, this works well.
답글삭제Obviously, the chain writing material in class could use a bit of work, and it isn't incredibly easy and straight forward to work with (thanks to Mr. Stark). However, you create an interesting scene that is disturbing and creative. The "Pop!" sound is also kind of interesting. Not bang or boom? No blood and guts scattered everywhere?
All in all, not the easiest story to interpret, but definitely among the more interesting.